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Ghan ([personal profile] ithika) wrote2003-10-08 11:29 pm

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A darkset moon
crowned with trails of cloud

Dragons dancing in the pale light
Wisened spirits of the night

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Dammit, why can't I write anything...

Read the word Dragon, churned out some cheap poetry. Took me 3 minutes 24 seconds

[identity profile] tattered-pinion.livejournal.com 2003-10-08 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
Curling drakes
Eyes of the night
Ancient fire
Timeless might

Crown of horns
muscled wing
Strength to kill
the Grace to sing

Most noble of wyrms
Gold skin of scales
Slayer of heroes
subject of tales

Re: Read the word Dragon, churned out some cheap poetry. Took me 3 minutes 24 seconds

[identity profile] bloodied-aura.livejournal.com 2003-10-08 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
I like the lines
Strength to kill
grace to sing

Re: Read the word Dragon, churned out some cheap poetry. Took me 3 minutes 24 seconds

[identity profile] louisthefly.livejournal.com 2003-10-08 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
i like the way
your comment is almost, but not quite
an haiku

this proves the point
that no matter what you say
you can write, and will

(what a shocking attempt at haiku on louis' part, might i add)

Re: Read the word Dragon, churned out some cheap poetry. Took me 3 minutes 24 seconds

[identity profile] bloodied-aura.livejournal.com 2003-10-09 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou.
Aah, Haiku is scary. *runs away*
not yours, I just don't like having to count syllables.
Yes. I am a sorry individual.

Re: Read the word Dragon, churned out some cheap poetry. Took me 3 minutes 24 seconds

[identity profile] louisthefly.livejournal.com 2003-10-09 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
i think if you're a good poet, the metre just flows and it ends up right
but i think that's a bit wishful, possibly

Re: Read the word Dragon, churned out some cheap poetry. Took me 3 minutes 24 seconds

[identity profile] bloodied-aura.livejournal.com 2003-10-09 05:08 am (UTC)(link)
Muahahaah.